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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 13, 2009 19:26:50 GMT
The Doctors Nightmare]
The Doctor looks over to where the 200 Bus had once stood and smiled Christiana i Hope you find what you are looking for yes we could of been Great together But ,"im so sorry he whisperd But there is someone else.Rose i still love her....
Love Who/ came a voice "Hello who are you? asked The Doctor Malcolm at your service i work for unit ok then says The Doctor so what do you Do im a Genius Malcolm Exspains that he once had to close a Giant Worm Hole is that Right beamed the Doctor you are A genius and i thought i was the only one .And who might you be Malcom asks . the Doctor .Doctor who no just the Doctor But you must have a name Smith thats Right Doctor Smith.ok Macolm The Doctor asks what brings you here ?.
He is coming Who is? The Doctor shouts Dont you know if i Did know i really would not be asking you Now Dont waste my Time Malcolm please tell me who is coming im losing my patience now i mean i used to be patient but not now so out with it spill.
you wont like it i promise you it will not be nice for youThe Doctor looks at Malcolm and sees his face has changeed Nooooooooooooo he screams it cant be i watched you Die
im sorry Doctor but its True im Back The Master Lucy my wife took strands of my hair and i was cloned but why screamed The Doctor would she do that after you Beat her and she was so badly Bruised .sorry Doctor but she Loves me and she wanted me back i treat her better now what untill you Grow Tired of her spat The Doctor What happened to your companions Doctor see you cant even Answer that The Doctor looked at The Master and he felt tears sting his cheeks
Donna he whisperd im so sorry but i had to leave you if you had of travelled with me you would of burnt up and i cant bare to see people i love Die.
Doctor ive got something planned for you its taken me a long time to finally find you
your Evil screamed the Doctor i should of left you when i had the chance but i wanted to try and Save you Doctor you are going to Die im sorry and your companion Rose is going to watch
But how i left her on Earth with my clone im sorry Doctor but he Died i found Rose and told her i could find you but she thinks you are both going to be Reunited
instead she will Watch you Die noooooooooooo you cant screamed The Doctor it will kill her
to be continued let me know what you think please
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 13, 2009 19:53:04 GMT
It's good I like the idea of the cloning, and how Malcolm turns into the Master, I'll have to think of the next part. Mmm, leave it with me, unless you think of another chapter to add, thanks for the phone call.
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 13, 2009 19:56:18 GMT
sorry i got cut off thought id put my plug in to charge my phone as it died oops forgot to plug it in Too much David on the brain tho not a bad thing
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 13, 2009 21:06:52 GMT
Not a bad thing at all. See what you think of what you've given me so far, I can always delete it, like a cyberman!!!
'Doctor, Doctor, wake up.' He felt someone shake his arm and sat bolt upright, his eyes wide awake and stared at the blonde in front of him. 'Rose! No, No this is another dream.' He backed away from her, edging further up the bed than before. He looked about him, he had no recollection of falling asleep, he had no recollection of the bed or Rose. 'Doctor, you're scaring me, what's wrong?' She sat down beside him and reached out a hand and touched his arm. He flinched, his hearts beating overtime. 'Doctor what is it, tell me?' She asked softly. 'What are you doing here? You're meant to be on the parallel universe with my clone...what...how did I get here?' 'Clone, parallel universe, Doctor what are you talking about?' She tried to laugh it off, but he was deadly serious. 'I never sleep, I never fall asleep, what am I doing in this bed, this is....no....' He looked down at the blue striped pyjamas and the room in which he was sitting. 'This is your mother's flat....' He opened and closed his mouth several times. 'This is wrong, this is all wrong, oh my head.' He closed his eyes as an enormous wave of pain coursed through his skull. He gripped his head with both hands and grimaced with the pain. Rose tried again to comfort him but withdrew immediately. She looked down at her hands, tiny burn marks were left on her palms, she looked up and saw tiny flashes of electrical veins flicker across his body. 'Doctor, DOCTOR what's happening to you?' She called stepping away from the bed. FLASH! CRACK! Rose screamed as the room lit up in a brilliant white light, she heard the Doctor yell loudly and then disappear. He felt the soft sand against his face and heard the water lapping against his trousers, he felt cold and very wet. He opened his eyes and blinked, sitting up he found himself to be upon a beach, a very familiar beach. 'What's happening, what's going on?' He scrambled to his feet, all about him sand and sea, rocks and more rocks and in the distance, just too far to reach unless he ran, he saw an image of Rose, standing as once before upon this very beach. As he ran towards her another figure came into view and he skidded to a halt as she gave her undying love for another. His mouth fell open, this was wrong, this was very wrong. 'Rose! ROSE! NO!' The figure turned and he saw the unmistakeable Harold Saxon standing before Rose wearing that unforgettable grin. He produced his laser screwdriver from his pocket as the Doctor screamed. He saw Rose turn to face him, her look of total bewilderment at the maniac running towards her as the Master opened fire. 'ROSE! Nooooo!' He screamed as she fell on the soft wet sand. 'What have you done? What have you done?' He ran towards her and knelt down beside the hologram figure as she faded into oblivion. He looked up at the Master, so confused, so bewildered. 'I told you what would happen, I made it clear what I would do.' He leaned towards the Doctor pocketing the laser screwdriver. 'You have till midnight on the fourth day to make your peace and then I'll return, you'll hear me knock 4 times and then you'll be gone.' He cuffed the Doctor across the jaw as he strode by and the Time Lord fell against the soft sand unconscious. He opened his eyes at the night sky, stars twinkling above him and the smell of soil near his face. He felt scared, scared of moving, scared of who or what he might find. He heard two voices sitting not too far from him and dared himself to look up. He saw a gingerhaired young woman sitting beside a grey haired man with a bobble hat and his hearts pounded. He was lying a few feet behind them, their concentration upon the sky above them, a telescope sitting between them and a flask and sandwiches underneath the seat of the old man. He listened as they talked and felt sick, it would only take a matter of seconds to realise that he was watching, and if she saw him, she would burn up and it would be his fault. He looked about him, he was lying in someone's vegetable patch and a few slugs were eyeing up his shoes for warmth and comfort in the damp evening air. He slipped and slid over the soil and hid behind the shed as Wilf turned around. 'What is it gramps?' Donna asked turning back to see for herself. 'Nothing darling, just the imaginings of an old man.' He replied turning back and lifting the flask. 'What like aliens and men in blue boxes?' She laughed. 'Huh, something like that.' Wilf replied watching her. The Doctor leaned his head back against the shed wall and swallowed hard. This could all be a nightmare, he could be dreaming and if he stepped out, she may not disintegrate, but could he really take that chance, he asked himself? In the light of the lamps dotted about the allotment he saw a familiar figure in black and strode angrily towards him. 'What are you, why are you doing this?' He growled reaching for his sonic screwdriver in the process. 'As if I needed to explain that to you.' The Master replied as the Doctor advanced. 'You're dead, I saw you, you never regenerated, what do you want from me.' The Doctor spat the words out, this was too much, even if this was a dream he couldn't afford to lose Donna again. 'The last of the Time Lords, there's a nice ring to it, don't you think?' 'What?' 'The Master, the most valiant of soldiers, fighters, Time Lords. I was brought back specifically to reach an ultimatum with the Daleks, and what did you do, you destroyed Gallifrey. I bet that doesn't sit well with you.' 'Stop it.' The Doctor glared, his sonic still raised. 'How many people will die Doctor before your song comes to an end? Three, four, how many children of the Earth will die because of you. You, the maverick time traveller, always interfering, always the dark one.' 'Dark, you want dark? I wasn't the one who manipulated the world into thinking the Toclafane were anything more than the bogeyman. You forget I know you, all that fighting, all those wars and you're still the same as ever.' 'That's what you think. With Rose, Martha, Jack out of the picture, that leaves who I wonder, ,ahh yes, the red haired feisty woman Donna. One mention of your name, I don't even have to touch her, just saying your name will burn her up.' 'Don't you dare.' The Doctor threatened, pushing the sonic level to the max. 'And here she comes now.' The Master sneered as the voices of Wilf and Donna began to grow ever so closer to them. 'No, please, I beg you don't.'
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 13, 2009 21:32:35 GMT
brilliant but going to have to wait now till tomorrow ;D
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 13, 2009 21:47:36 GMT
Oh the suspense is killing me. This is fun!
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 11:10:06 GMT
"Grandad Help me what is Happening i Dont know Sweet heart The Tardis Transports Donna and her Grandfather Aboard "where am/ i she screams
"why am i here? but wilf knows he cant tell her The Doctor said if he Did she would Burn up
THE Doctor sees Donna and her Grandfather matariise in front of him and screams No no
The master looks at The Doctor and laughs "you were warned Doctor and now you will see your companion ".Die no you cant he screamed i wont
let you Do this Do what? and who are you Donna looks at the Timelord standing infront of her you look familier she says .
i think we have met before " you cant Remember screams The Doctor but she can Doctor The master is laughing so much ok then Donna asks whats Going on ?"i want to know wilf stands pleading with his hands to the Master Dont hurt my little Girl he says she is all i have got .
But i thought you were Dead the Doctor told me. "Donna you are very fiesty woman with Red hair and i know you have saved The Doctor more than once Donna has rememberd as he says it Donna starts to Glow so Bright Noo You Cant" Kill Her i will Do Anything. Please Stop.
Donna Burns up infront of The Doctor her Grandfather screams out "Donna he screams "WhyDid you kill my little Girl ?
the Master looks at the pain on the Doctors Face and laughs "your Evil screams wilf i wont let you Kill again The Doctor is my freind.
Wilf grabs hold of the Hammer standing on the rack of the Tardis and Hits the master on the back of the Head.
He falls on a heap on the floor "Well done shouts The Doctorbut hetoo is Devastated he has Lost Donna and never wanted it to happenThe Doctor feels volts going through his bodyNooo he screams it hurts make it stop.
Wilf is powerless to help The Timelord he knows if he trys to touch him he Will Die .
Wilf looks to see if The master is still out for the count as he hit him pretty hard with the Hammer but not too hard but there is no sign of himThe master has Gone. all he hears is laughter in the Distance Doctor i will knock another 3 Times then your time is up what Does he mean Doctor asks Wilf.
"Wilf i really ,Dont know but its scaring me so much im so sorry about Donna she was so brave i will always Remember her fondly .
Wilf scratches his head and the Doctor can see he has been crying ive Decided i Want to Travel with you but you cant Wilf you saw what Happened to your Daughter yes i know but may be i can help you get Revenge for my Daughters Death.and kill the Master i could help . i can not go back home now The Doctor falls over clutching his stomache "what is it Doctor "i Dont know but it hurts. make it stop once more he has volts going through his whole Body i cant breathe screams The Doctor help me .
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 13:22:47 GMT
pleaase leave Feedback
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 14, 2009 13:33:17 GMT
This is the Doctor's nightmare, bloomin heck its a nightmare for me. You've just added the Tardis in the allotment and I'm thinking, now what. But then as we discussed, it is a nightmare, anything is possible. It#s a good storyline, this was a brilliant idea of yours Pauline, what a team. I'll need to scribble some notes down. Now I can understand what its like with two geniuses like Ruffle Tea and Steven Moffat working together bashing ideas around. Gangsta Time Lord back shortly
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 14:25:03 GMT
cant wait for next chapter and yes any thing possible we are a good team quote from Doctor who lol
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 14, 2009 17:15:04 GMT
The Tardis whirred into autopilot as the Doctor writhed in agony on the floor. The pain was intense, he could hardly breathe; his body arced with electricity, sparks of blue light flickered across the flooring and up through the console. Wilf looked on helplessly. The Tardis bounced, jolted and threw its occupants about like clothes in a washing machine, Wilf grabbed hold of the barrier beside the seat as with one last jolt the Tardis came to a halt. Her central column purred quietly as Wilf picked himself up and cautiously walked towards the Doctor still lying but now shivering on the ground, heavily perspiring. 'Doctor, oh my god, what do I do?' He asked nervously. He reached a hand down to touch the Doctor but withdrew quickly as he received an electric shock. He looked down at the burn marks on his hands and backed away from the Time Lord. He walked quickly towards the doors and looked out on a building, with a water column running down even further below him. A WW2 airman stood before him with a friendly smile. 'Can you help me, it's the Doctor.....' Wilf began as Jack pushed past him and into the ship. He proceeded towards the Doctor as Wilf called back. 'Don't touch him, he'll burn you.' 'I'll take my chances.' Jack grinned. 'Hey big fella.' He flinched as the electricity coursed through his own body from the Doctor. The Time Lord opened his eyes and swallowed with difficulty. 'The Master.....he's....he's back.' He shivered. 'I know.' Jack replied encouraging the Doctor to his feet. The Doctor focussed on Jack's face, he pulled himself up to look at him squarely, the electricity sparks prickling the skin along Jack's body. 'How do you know?' 'Arkangel network just sparked back into existence - excuse the pun. He's been fooling Unit for months, that worm hole, he set it up, not sure how though.' Jack replied, flinching again. 'Malcolm, he's using......no....he IS Malcolm.' The Doctor straightened up and shivering focussed on his surroundings. 'I don't know what's real anymore Jack. Is this real, are you really here Jack?' He fell against the airman the pain once again kicking in. 'Come on Doctor.' Jack hoisted him over his shoulders and felt the sparks prickle down his back. 'Gwen, secure the hub, deny access to everyone, including the pizza delivery. Ianto, get Wilf is it?' The old man nodded. 'Get Wilf a cup of tea. Put the hub on Red Alert, I'm expecting the Master or Unit to call real soon.' He carried the Doctor towards the sleeping quarters as the Time Lord began to hallucinate and talk in his sleep. 'Rose....he killed Rose, he killed my clone.....Donna....burned up.....Martha.....' 'Voice of a nightingale.' Smiled Jack. 'She's safe, I'd just come off the phone to her when you arrived. Where did you see Rose?' 'Pow....Powell Estate and .....then Daleg Ulv Stranden, arrgh.' He drew up his knees. 'It burns, oh it burns, Jack help me.' He screamed. 'Doctor.' A brilliant white light shone around the room, Wilf and Jack shielded their eyes, as the room returned to normal, the Doctor was gone.
He opened his eyes and rose from the white floor surrounded by a thick cold mist. He felt no pain, no arcs of blue lightning emitting from his body, no pain whatsoever. He could see nothing above him, or below and nothing ahead to the left or the right or behind or in front. 'Where am I?' He mused. 'THE VOID BETWEEN WORLDS.' Came a deep booming voice. He turned all about him, but saw nobody. 'Who are you, show yourself, only a madman talks to himself, and I'm not going mad.' 'But I'm you're conscience.' The Time Lord pulled out his sonic screwdriver and held it up, the reading came back - blank. He pocketed it, puzzled. 'Alright.' He replied, pushing his hands into his trouser pockets and looking about him. 'If you're my conscience, why do you not speak like me?' The voice reflected for a moment. 'A Time Lord takes on many voices.' 'Even still.' replied the Doctor. 'It's not any of my 10 voices.' There was silence for a moment then the voice spoke. 'It is your 11th.' The Doctor went quiet. 'Why is the Master here?' The Doctor called out. 'If you're my conscience, answer me that, Where's Rose?' 'Dead!' The Doctor's blood ran cold. 'And Donna?' 'Dead.' 'Martha?' 'Dead.' 'Ha! You lie, Jack spoke to her.' 'Jack is also dead.' 'Ha again, Jack can't die. Although,' he muttered to himself. 'Wouldn't like to see his chances in the wormhole.' The Doctor stared into the vast space. 'You know this smacks to me of the Tricksters brigade. Send me back to Earth, there's no real reason to keep me here.' 'He is coming.' The female voice from the bus called out. 'What?' 'He will knock only four times.' She replied. 'Stop this.' Shouted the Doctor. 'I will live, and you will die.' Came the voice of Harold Saxon. 'Why are you doing this, what are you going to gain by doing this?' The Doctor shouted, his blood boiling. 'Send me back to Earth, I need to know the truth.' 'You can't handle the truth, if you could, it would break your hearts.' 'Words of a madman, show yourself.' 'Words of a lost Time Lord, you are the madman, you are going mad. Give up, give up now Doctor, surrender yourself to me and I promise to make it as painful as possible.' 'No. Never.' 'So be it.' A deep piercing squeal echoed throughout the void space, the Doctor clamped his hands to his ears and gritted his teeth against the sound. He stepped back and felt himself falling, free falling through the piercing screams. He opened his eyes and saw nothing, only blackness, only the deep dark blackness and he was still falling.
(over to you Daveygirl1)
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 19:21:40 GMT
what can i say brilliant loving it
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 20:46:57 GMT
The Doctor fell untill he landed on some thing soft he Really Thought had hurt him self but something was holding him he felt for broken bones nothing he was in one piece and no bruises But What he Did Not know why had he not fallen he should of been Dead by now he Infact he was floating but how was it possible he thought.
He rubbed his eye he heard a voice whisper Doctor its me he saw a shooting star
coming towards him Doctor its me who is me asked The doctor Dont you Remember you saved me well tried too
your not the Doctor continued Astrid is that you?yes its me im so sorry continued the Doctor but i dont know what is real any more .
you see ive been having such a bad time of it latley i lost Donna who is she? asked Astrid she was my freind the Doctors Voice got softer she saved me Astrid i saw her Die infront of me it was Awful .
The Doctor Grited his teeth with Rage The Master did this who is he only a man with so Many Faces he Told me that my Rose wasDead and martha and jack you Dont believe him do you Doctor no i dont believe him but i dont trust him either How come im not falling Astrid i your on a cushion of air Doctor Dont know i was in the Tardis with wilf Astrid with Donnas Grandad and the next im here Astrid dont worry its my turn to help you now the he Could not of vanished into thin air screamed wilf looking at the empy space where the Doctor had once stoodI its ok big fella Jack told him we are going to get him back i promise. wilf tells jack about Donna
shes Dead i know and im so sorry she was a good freind we had fun i will miss her said jack looking lost in thought.
you have to get the Doctor back Jack hes my freind if any thing happens to him
its ok old timer im right on it he puts on his transporter wristband and presses the Button ok gramps im off but if i dont come back tell unit to send back up.
There was a flash and he was gone Astrid is holding the Doctor although shes only stardust some how she manages to keep the Doctor from falling jack materilises infront of Astrid and The Doctor.
Doctor Doctor its me Jack where did you come from please to see you is itReally you im losing my mindi Dont Know What is real any more i have been hearing voices talking to me Jack
its ok Doctor relax it really is me see pinch me if you dont believe me ouch well you did say pinch me i know but you have bruised my arm sorry jack but there is more inportaint stuff we have to stop the master hes going to kill me he has
said he will knock 2 times but i dont understand what it means i heard my self talking my elventh self if that makes sense.
sorry Doc you have lost me what do you mean Eleventh self i dont know jack
Astrid im so glad you were here i never got to thank you for helping the Doctor
Astrid leaves the Doctor with Jack Doctor i have to go Goodby astrid and thanks with that Astrid has shot up in to the sky like a shooting star Goodbye The Doctor can just about hear a faint voice Echoing in the Distance Goodbye Doctor.
Come on Doc lets get you back to Unit How did you find me ?Jack touches his wrist But didnt i cut that off you before you left me in cardiff ?yes you Did but i got it out of your pocket when you were not looking lucky for me i did or i would never of found you.
Jack Touches his wrist Transporter and him the and Doctorare Back in UNIT
The Doctor sees a familer face no he screams your not malcolm your the master
no says jack its malcolm hes been helping us no its not Jack i should knowi have seen this face before and its not malcolm.
look Doctor its me remember me i helped you save all those people from the worm hole you are not malcolm screamed the Doctor you killed Donna
calm Down Doc it really is Malcolm im losing my mind screams the Doctor as he ruffles up his hair puts on his brainy specs
hes Trying to Driveme Mad Jack do i look like i amnot Telling The Truth Look at my face this is a honest face i never lie jACK Did you not hear me its the Master but jack does not hear a thing .
hes looking at malcolm and his eyes are slowly closing you will obey me spat the Master you will obey me
Jack slowly walks over to wilf who has just finished his tea and asks for another cup
jack grabs him by the arm you will come with me he says and Dont struggle because if you do you will get hurt and we dont want to do that whos we repied wilf your see now no funny buissness i wanted another cup of tea jack goes over to the Doctor follow me he says ille take you to wilf
jack looks at the master and nods he knows what he has to do he picks up the two pairs of handcuffs and pushes the Doctor through a damp tunnel and pushes him to the Ground Jack what are you Doing?Jack hancuffs the Doctor to a railing and leaves him while he goes to get wilf The Doctor hears scrapping no he says Rats just what i dont need he delves in his pockets with his teeth and finds a stick of bread always know big pockets would come in handy he thought he spat out the bread and the Rats came over to eat it there you are said the Doctor some nice bread for you Dont eat meim thin already you want some one with meat
The Doctor hears a Tappibng tap tap it cant be rats he says it sounds like a morse code
there it is again Tap tap tap tap
it cant be any worse thinks The Doctor im handcuffed to a railing and he sees a shadow moving towards him and freezes in Terror.
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Post by medusacascade on Apr 14, 2009 22:00:27 GMT
Oh crikey I'm lost already. This will take longer than an hour, I'll need to sleep on this, what a rollercoaster of a nightmare. After this if he doesn't regenerate, I will.
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Post by daveygirl1 on Apr 14, 2009 23:21:01 GMT
hehe have to make it on edge of seat no he wont i promise :Dit will End soon like the Doctors song
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